My Immortal: Harry Potter Fanfiction; Rewritten
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Ongoing, First published Jul 23, 2014
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Hello. My name is Shelby, but you can call me Fred. I'm an eleven year-old who loves reading and writing in general, all types of it.
I also have had my chance to dabble in the literary section of the internet, known as Fan Fiction.
Now, if you've had any experiences in the world of fan fiction, you might have heard of My Immortal, a fan-written
story set in the world of the Harry Potter book series. The story itself is infamous for it's horribly-written characters,
dialogue, and the overall astounding amount of grammatical errors. Seeing as I don't have much experience in the writing world,
I thought it would be a fun experiment to try rewriting My Immortal. This will actually be my first time actually, well  attempting publicity
with my writing, so I'd love feedback from Wattpad users, so I can hopefully improve! With that said, I can hopefully publish at least a 
chapter every day, so if you like what you see, keep reading, and thank you for your time! :) -Shelby
All Rights Reserved
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