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Celeste
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Fantasy
I stepped onto the ship with uncertain steps. It was the military boat, diva, they called it. I fluttered my fan against the heat as my father, captain of this vessel approached. But, as always, he wasn't talking to me. "The ship has captives sire, down in the brig," he let out a short snort of amusement, "they speak of mermaids." The general smiled. "The heat does strange things, and pirates are always drunk in any case." The guards stepped on board, disappearing into the belly of the ship. The general followed. My father slid his eyes to me. "Celeste? What are you doing? Women on the seas is bad luck!" He scolded. I suppressed rolling my eyes. "We're in port. Can't I see my dear father after months away?" He ushered me off the ship. "I missed you too" I mutter into my fan as he steps back on the deck, and begins shouting orders. --------------- Terrible sewing, sloppy writing, and burnt cakes. These are the fine qualities of Celeste Reed. Born in rosewood, a sweet little boring town that she calls home. Until her father, captain of one of many military ships, returns home with a surprise that might just turn her world upside down... Or under water.
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Tension between mermaids and humans had always been high, especially after the queen of the mermaids had been killed by humans, regardless that it was an accident. So many years later when Princess Muriel becomes curious about humans, she keeps it to herself. Muriel lives in a castle with her father, sisters, and best friend, Percy. Some of her sisters blame her for their mother's death so Muriel avoids them when at all possible. She gains an interest in humans and trails after their ships. For humans, mermaids are bad luck so she knows that they won't attempt to harm her. The first time Prince Philip steps foot on a fishing boat he witnesses the crew catch a mermaid. Although terrified, he moves forward to help untangle her as no one else is moving. He prays that she'll forgive him. Worry forms when she takes a lock of his hair. Was that a way of marking him? Regardless, he doesn't fight, not wanting to make it worse. Worry increases when she's spotted again. Muriel begins to develop a crush on Prince Philip after he frees her from the net. When her sister's displeasure with her grows worse, Muriel seeks to avoid it. In a desperate attempt to do so she finds herself cave of the sea witch Minerva. Philip's kindness remains prominent in her mind when Minerva offers her a choice to be a human. Hesitantly she agrees, unaware of how different the human world from hers. Philip's bodyguard begins to catch on that Muriel is different and Percy and the king quickly become desperate to find her. My own version of "The Little Mermaid" by Hans Christian Andersen. Used to be called, "Mermaid Wish." (Magic in this world works differently than in my series, 'Tèarmann Chronicles')

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