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A village quietly nestled in the middle of a seemingly endless forest has one rule-don't leave. The small population demands strict regulation to keep their people safe, but Sierra has never believed that being held captive was the best way to help people grow. She's always wanted to venture beyond the settlement into the forest after countless legends told by the village elder, or in books. 

Travelers often times come into the inn Sierra works at, confirming her suspicions about the rumors. One in particular has always caught her eye. It's the story of an ancient, endless abyss that places itself near a towering cliff. It's said to be the source of all negative, malicious spirits that lurk in the forest around the settlement, so it's forbidden for anyone to explore this abyss.

It's also told in the legend of the abyss that there is a voice that talks to anyone courageous enough to go directly against the rules of the settlement, luring them into the abyss as prey so that they may fall forever and never return.

Sierra intends to prove the residents of the town wrong. After hearing about the abyss from a pair of travelers, she sets out to try to explore it, and there's no telling what the truth is about this trench...All Rights Reserved

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Atomic Abyss by Hobbledehoy1234

Forty years ago, the world ended at the hands of the Monarch of the Abyss, such a being spread it's accursed powers across the world and brought humanity to the brink of extinction. Even a world filled with super powers stood no chance, all hope was not lost however, a light shone brightly as the world's end drew near, slaying this fiend... for now... Even after the death of the Monarch of the Abyss the world is far from stable or safe, what remains of humanity lives inside a singular city, protected by a handful of sworn heroes, monsters lurk outside, remnants of that awful day. Forty years later a new hero appears, bearing a scarily familiar power, he'll endure many burdens in a bid to learn more about himself and those he works with in this corrupt society where heroes are revered as gods among men and all logic is replaced with propaganda. A threat from within their own walls threatens to tear humanity apart from the shadows, the heroes will need to overcome both the monsters beyond their walls and threats from their own people in order to prevail, humanity's fate will soon be at hand, will it be salvation or oblivion?

Saved By The Cold-Hearted Billionaire by iwaswiththestars

He had a heart covered with ice, but for her, he'd burn himself to ashes... and the world under her feet. *** Beckett Clainfer wanted to find his parent's murderer. With that in mind, he endured every pain for the pleasure that's about to come - Reputation, wealth, and a drug den that suffices his needs and luxuries. However, when Vivianne entered his life, everything went chaotic. He sinfully fell in love with her when he should have never been involved with her in the first place... Especially when she wanted him dead more than anyone else. He's willing to do anything to save her, and he was willing to cross the line as he joined Foedus Corporation in Agrianthropos City for her. But could he find salvation in Hell? *** Vivianne Allamino had been suffering throughout her life. Being forced to take over their illegal family business in leverage to her mother's safety scared the shit out of her. Since childhood, she was trained... and was controlled like a mere puppet. And now, she was done tolerating all this shit. She just wanted everything to end. Now, she tried to kill him. But the cold-hearted billionaire wanted to save her. Could he?

My Last Dive [Made in Abyss Fanfiction] by ImberLapis

How far would you go to achieve a dream? If an opportunity to attain it presents itself to you, how tightly would you cling to it? What would you be willing to sacrifice for it? Len Keiri has a dream he thought he could never achieve: become an explorer in a world that had already been discovered. But he's presented with a once-in-a-life opportunity: a chance to explore the Abyss, the last undiscovered place in the world. A great pit tunneling miles deep into the earth, the Abyss is a world in its own, offering great fame and fortune to those who dare to plumb its depths. Those who have seized those offers become legends themselves, passed along with stories of the great pit. But of course, every rose has its thorn. Unforgiving environments unlike those on the surface, deadly creatures that far outsmart the human mind, and ailments that afflict those who try to return home from the depths. The Abyss welcomes outsiders, but it doesn't treat them kindly, and it doesn't want to let them go. And if it does, it more often than not keeps their sanity in exchange for their freedom. However, Len doesn't care. He's willing to throw himself headlong into the Abyss, no matter how far he has to go, no matter what it costs him. But what does that actually entail, and is he truly willing to sacrifice everything? [You don't have to know Made in Abyss to enjoy this story] •I don't own the images and music tracks used for this story's chapters with the exception of my character drawings

Kingdom of the Zodiac by SBLoveAuthor

The locals had warned me that no one in their right mind would enter the North Woods alone, not unless they had a death wish. It's a good thing then that I am not in my right mind. Fear had prevented me from returning to this place for years, but the nightmares depriving me of sleep threatened to steal what little sanity I had left, leaving me with no other choice than to confront the source of my apprehension. I was tired of pretending that everything was ok. That I was ok. I needed the nightmares to stop. But in order for that to happen, I needed to uncover my lost memories. The North Woods held answers, of that much I was certain. So here I stand, ready to face my past. If only I could get my legs to move. **FIRST DRAFT - UNEDITED **

Yours, Forever by AuthorIris_xx

She was his motivation. Madison Connor, the only woman he had ever loved, the woman he had hurt, the woman he had left. Billionaire Damien Daniels had three things he needed to accomplish in his life. First, he was going to get to the root of his past. Second, he was going to make the Connors pay. Third, the last thing, he didn't even know. But he knew there was something remaining, a wrong he needed to right. And it was staring straight at him. A dark truth that risked breaking him apart, that could mar his existence. In all these though she was at the center of it all, Madison Connor. Lord help him. She was the one thing he could never have. His enemy's little sister. Eyes like the sea, strawberry blonde curls and those dotted freckles atop her nose; she was his obsession. She was the beginning of his downfall, his damnation and motivation. *** He was the one man she couldn't avoid back then, and the man she couldn't resist. Damien Daniel, her childhood crush who never looked her way even once. Her brother's enemy. She was too small for him, not sexy or beautiful enough for him, too shy to even talk to him. Their attraction was unmistakable, almost beyond control, but as much as she ached to be his, she feared the pressure of his demands. *** Submitting to each other meant they had to break so many rules. Could they? Would they? Their love was forbidden. Their intertwining past threatening to tear them apart. A bumpy ride. So many obstacles and trials. It took days, months and years, but what's meant to be will always be! HIGHEST RANKINGS! #4 - billionaire (16/7/22) #8 - childhoodsweethearts (17/8/22) #2 - fated (18/8/22) #1 - revenge (18/8/22) #1 - poorgirl (14/9/22) #5 - ceo (20/9/22)

Touch Her And... (Completed) by chakrabortypuja94

Dev, he saw the same dream every night, the same beautiful curly haired girl, looking at him with those pleading pair of eyes, but he could do nothing to save her from drowning. He tried to avoid this weird attraction towards an imaginary girl, tried to fight the growing pain inside him but what did he do when the girl from his dreams came into his life like a gust of wind? He settled to his instincts. Instincts that made him borderline obsessive. Rik, he learned to control the pain, the dream didn't bother him anymore the way it bothered his twin brother, at least that's what he told himself, that the suffocations are normal, that not finding peace at anything was normal, that painting the picture of her and keeping them secret was normal. He hated her for disturbing his peace of mind, until the day he saw her from the very front. And then he knew he will do anything to have her in his life. Teressa, being ignorant to everything, dived into a world that took her back to the darkest part of her life. A life that kept following her from the past, along with the twin brothers. The more she learnt the more pain she felt it. The growing emotion, that led her towards the truth. A curse that knew no bounds, started pulling them together without their knowledge. _________________________________________ UNDER MAJOR EDITING. ● PLEASE NOTE : The pictures/videos or songs, none of these belong to me. I have borrowed them from Google or YouTube for the sole purpose of sharing some of my imaginations related to this story to my readers. ●The book cover is made by me with the help of various pictures taken from Google and other sources. Hence, please don't use or steal it, without my permission. ● And also this story is my own, my first. I am putting my heart into it, so please don't copy it at any circumstances. Your feedbacks are welcome but it would be nice if you don't be vulgar. Love.♥️ Started on - 15/07/2020 Completed on - 22/01/2022.

Flaw by cjcoomans

The Dommasc Society saw the corruption and potential war that new-age movements such as feminism, LGBTQ, and racial equality could bring to their island, and therefore decided to eradicate it. They cut themselves off from the influence of the world, and they would rule their society as they wanted. They never expected their perfectly set out plan to go wrong, but it did and so she was born. Flaw was supposed to be his, but she broke free and started to hunt the hunters. This was never supposed to happen, but she knew that flaws did not last forever, and neither would she. Blake knows her way around the island, so when a mysterious explosion went off, why did she end up being kidnapped, and better yet, why did she feel the need to stay with her kidnapper? Ensley doesn't have long to live, and she knows it. Her heart is getting weaker, but if anybody found out, she would be exiled. When her brother's murderer injects her with a toxin, she feels herself getting better, and falling in love with the one who stole her world from her. [Completed 2019.05.30]

Desires of the Obsessed by CuriousWyvern

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Return to the Abyss / Male Reader x Made In Abyss by PhoenixFD

How far would you go to achieve your goals? How far would you go to find the truth? How far would you go to become a legend? These questions are directed at anyone who is brave or foolhardy enough to travel into the enormous cavern that descends deep into the Earth. That place, filled with mystery and wonder, is called... The Abyss. The Abyss, spanning 1000 meters in diameter and with a depth of at least 20,000 meters, is the focal point of the city that surrounds it, Orth. There are six known layers within this cavern, with each one having its own distinct ecosystem, along with unique flora and fauna, all of which are both fascinating and dangerous. Many, both from Orth, as well as other countries, have descended into the depths to achieve their goals: Fame, Fortune, Discovery. What mysteries lay hidden within the Abyss? How was it created? Who created it, and why? One thing is for certain. These mysteries won't solve themselves! So get out there young cave raider, there is much to do!

17 Days & Die ✔️ by ishikasbookshelf

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Atomic Abyss

Forty years ago, the world ended at the hands of the Monarch of the Abyss, such a being spread it's accursed powers across the world and brought humanity to the brink of extinction. Even a world filled with super powers stood no chance, all hope was not lost however, a light shone brightly as the world's end drew near, slaying this fiend... for now... Even after the death of the Monarch of the Abyss the world is far from stable or safe, what remains of humanity lives inside a singular city, protected by a handful of sworn heroes, monsters lurk outside, remnants of that awful day. Forty years later a new hero appears, bearing a scarily familiar power, he'll endure many burdens in a bid to learn more about himself and those he works with in this corrupt society where heroes are revered as gods among men and all logic is replaced with propaganda. A threat from within their own walls threatens to tear humanity apart from the shadows, the heroes will need to overcome both the monsters beyond their walls and threats from their own people in order to prevail, humanity's fate will soon be at hand, will it be salvation or oblivion?