Save Me
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Last published Wed, Sep 25, 2019
Two teenage girls who just finished freshman year find two magic bracelets, which sends them on a fantastic but dangerous adventure to save another teenage girl with her own magic bracelet from a lonely spire in a strange land.
*This Story Is In Progress*
Hello Readers,
Welcome! I hope you enjoy my story. Please leave comments, like the story, follow me, and especially keep reading the rest of the story as I continue to publish the chapters. Thanks a million!
Please note that I may publish chapters when I have a significant portion of it complete even though the chapter is not always finished. This allows you, my readers, to get to read the story faster than if you wait until I complete it. Second, you can somewhat see how I write my drafts and process my thoughts. Third, you can comment on the chapter, which I might use and change up the chapter providing you more input into what might happen in the story, kind of like a CYOA (choose your own adventure) book.
As a side note, I am four units away from finishing my Masters of Art in Teaching, so if you want some pointers with your writing or need help with eediting, just let me know.
Sincerely,
Riley
*This story is original. Please do not use my work in any way without my permission. While Riley Rock is my pen name, I, the author, still have All Rights Reserved.
Started: September 23, 2019
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