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Tihomir Kovacs and Kaja Fe'Tochter are heretics in the eyes of the Church Noferin, one by choice and the other by birth. Forced to flee the only homes they've ever known, they take to banditry to survive. When a job goes horribly wrong, the pair begin a quest for vengeance against the most powerful human organization on the continent: the Church Noferin. A shadowy hound haunting Kovacs may be just the tool they need, or the instrument of their fall.


Angeron was born the day his father died protecting their nation from invaders. All his life he's worked to make the man's sacrifice worth the cost, but fears despite his reputation as an unbeatable warrior, he never will.

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