The Black Dog (Draft 1 Feedback Appreciated)

The Black Dog (Draft 1 Feedback Appreciated)

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Tihomir Kovacs and Kaja Fe'Tochter are heretics in the eyes of the Church Noferin, one by choice and the other by birth. Forced to flee the only homes they've ever known, they take to banditry to survive. When a job goes horribly wrong, the pair begin a quest for vengeance against the most powerful human organization on the continent: the Church Noferin. A shadowy hound haunting Kovacs may be just the tool they need, or the instrument of their fall. Angeron was born the day his father died protecting their nation from invaders. All his life he's worked to make the man's sacrifice worth the cost, but fears despite his reputation as an unbeatable warrior, he never will. Book cover courtesy of CoversForfree20010
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Welcome to planet Talvaris, your generic isekai world filled with magic, dragons, and voluptuous female elves who look like they escaped from an illustrators search history. Everything here is as beautiful as the goddess Celes envision it, if you just ignore the slavery and racism on the corner. Unfortunately, maintaining this picturesque fantasy realm costs divine power. Luckily for the goddess, divine power can be charged by the Talvarians' prayer. And nothing beats the high-quality prayer of a Talvarian during the act of killing or being killed. That's why the occasional demon invasions are needed, oh and the OP otherworlder hero is also needed to tone down the invasion. Nobody wants the sweet Talvarians to get wiped out, right? But this time the celestial HR department makes a mistake. Alex Solomon is not a teenager, not handsome, and definitely not a Japanese. He is just a regular pot belly millennials who spend most of his time looking at the screen every day, just like the one who reading this now. Totally doesn't meet the goddess's standards. Hence, the beautiful but angry goddess cursed Alex Solomon to become an orc and banish him to the Demon Kingdom with nothing but a ability to access Earth internet. Stuck among demons, Alex Solomon decide if the goddess wants him to be a monster, he'll be the worst kind possible - a monster with ideas. Armed with memes, wikipedia articles, and misquoted great thinker, he and the demon army set out on a quest for revenge by doing the most disruptive thing that have been proven on earth: Building world peace, freedom, and democracy across Talvaris. One Tomahawk missile at a time. New Chapters every Tuesday & Friday For 30 chapters ahead, you can check at RR For 40 chapters ahead, you can check and support my patreon at patreon.com/Bimbanana

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