How To: Spare A Life

Saiouma/Oumasai Phantom Thief AU. Contains: DEATH, some BULLYING, NO SMUT. Just kinda sad and fluffy.
So. . . this is my first time doing this. Feedback is greatly appreciated as well as constructive criticism and suggestions. It's not the best, but I've been working on it for several months and hope you guys like it.
Requests ARE allowed. They don't have to be this ship or a ship at all. I write about tons of stuff.
I really enjoy writing, but I suck at grammar and punctuation so point out any mistakes so I can fix them as soon as possible.
I have the story finished but it'll take a while to get typed because I still got school. I'll finish as soon as I can, though.
If you read this far it's kind of like PMMM but I promise I didn't do that on purpose or try to copy it in any way. It just kinda happened. Sorry.