Far Away From The Nest
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Complete Sun, Nov 10, 201936m
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Ito po'y 'short' story na sinulat ko para sa publication na ipapasa namin sa subject na Creative Writing. Trip ko lang na i-post ito sa watty at isa pa akong amateur writer, sakaling may makakabasa. English nga lang 'to kasi 'di raw ma-criticize 'pag nasa ibang language yung mga short stories. Plano ko rin nga sanang isulat 'to sa Filipino. Anyways, please feel free to review po.
For the foreign readers, please excuse the lack of translation for a few sentences/phrases/terms that are written in Filipino.
Advance thank you for reading.
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THIS STORY IS ALMOST ENTIRELY FICTION AND IS NOT BASED ON REAL LIFE EVENTS. K?
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