From the Ocean

From the Ocean

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A short story about a love destined to fail that I wrote as part of GCSE prep. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!
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Rachel Dawn Evans, a high school girl who has a big crush on the boy with ocean eyes. To her, he seemed like a nice guy and would like to get to know him better. They began talking and after a year, things don't seem to be going their way. Perhaps their story wasn't meant to have a happy ending. Perhaps, this is a story of growth, the process of maturity. A story of acceptance. Remember, you can adore those ocean eyes all you want. But be careful, don't drown in them. Tw; mentions of abuse, self-harm and attempt at suicide. Proceed with caution. Note: I wrote this story 4/5 years ago. Decided to pick it up and edited it a bit recently. Nonetheless, the writing style is still pretty much how i wrote 4/5 years ago back when i just started. The writing isn't polished. I didn't really change much of the writing because I wanted to see how much I've improved (not that much to be honest) and also to preserve my old writings. Also, the story is in first person pov. ALSO REMINDER this is a really cringy story i once wrote for fun and as a gift for my friend. If you're here for giggles then have fun. Cover credit goes to my bestie; Edryan_ on wattpad. Go check her out ^_^

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