Ghosts on the Mind Road

Confessional? Docudrama? Memoir? When it's finished, I will have a better sense of what this is. Right now, it is a work in progress. I wrote the original version in the third person, imitating the narrator in Jonathan Franzen's novel, Freedom. That didn't work as well as I'd hoped. This version is written in the first person, but a few "she's" and "hers" may remain. Let me know if you find them.