The Wise Betrayal
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Last published Fri, Sep 11, 2015
this has been rewritten and restarted and the title change. now called The Lost Girl
A young girl finds herself in a world she does not understand, a world that was hidden from her.
What will happen when she is dragged back in to a world that caused her parents death and for her to hide her true identity from the onces who care for her.
What will Melody do when she learns the truth of why her
parents died?
Will her and her sister survive the same fate?
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