The Eleventh
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Ongoing9h 15m
Last published Sun, Nov 4, 2012
"I hear Celeste call my name but I focus on a cab that’s heading right for me at god knows what miles per hour. I feel the urge to close my eyes, I suddenly imagine myself at the other side of the road safe and sound from the psychotic cab drivers. I hear a horn beep and a couple of screams before feeling a slight whisk of air against my face. When I open my eyes, I’m not on the road. I’m not with Celeste. I am on the other side of the road staring at the group of people who just pushed me, including Celeste, who’s standing there with a massive grin on her face. The group of people standing with her are just staring at the spot I disappeared. What the hell just happened?!"
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Carrie Garcia lost her father at a young age in a horrific accident, her mother is now remarried to a wealthy man and she has a good education at a private school. Now that she is almost eighteen she is becoming curious about what happened to her father all those years ago. After a strange meeting with her Father’s lawyer she becomes suspicious and is offered a chance to find out what really happened. Carrie wants to find out what happened, but when her Mother and step Father disapprove she has no choice but to break the rules and go to the city. With the help of her father's friends, who live in an abandoned theater, she uncovers more secrets than she ever thought she would, including the reason why her father was killed all those years ago.
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