Built for Sin

Built for Sin

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The night was almost silent, the only sound coming from a tiny being curled up in the corner. As it shook, the shackles on it's ankles rattled, keeping rhythm with it's pained breaths. The cold, accentuated by the darkness, wrapped around the beings small frame, leaving it utterly susceptible to the sickness in it's lungs. It was close to dying. It heard the sound of the cell door opening, and pulled itself as far as it could into the darkness. It knew hiding would do no good, but there was nothing else they could do. Two large men made their way into the cell, one holding a lamp. It lit the cell with light, something the room was rarely filled with. As the men got closer, the light cast itself onto the hidden being, uncovering a thin girl. Alison was taken from everything she knew. For years she's used and forgotten, neglected to the point of death... She's saved though, by someone who should hold no sympathy for her. But to be saved means becoming the very thing that haunts her dreams. Uncontrolable mood swings. A thirst for misery that can never be satisfied. A hatred towards herself and the man that saved her. Revenge for her lost life.... Will she fight the urges brought on by the influences in her life, or will she fully accept that she was built for sin?
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In a dystopian world, where the strongest prevails, having peace is a luxury. Especially when someone from the past is out to destroy everything we have built up over the past 15 years. And with Christmas approaching, our group get to face ten hellish days. Preview: In his fury, the chains have rubbed his wrists and neck raw, despite me trying to calm him down. He suddenly calms down when the screams in the cell next to us switch to the sound of bones breaking. Now he sits with foam on his lips and his eyes wide, looking that way. After ten minutes, the sounds of the boys in our cell have died down, and we all look at the wall that separates us from the crackling of the breaking bones. And then suddenly all is quiet. After a few silent minutes, our cell door opens slowly. From the ball of light from the ceiling, the little girl in the doorway is illuminated. She is completely covered in blood and doesn't move. Then she opens her eyes and carefully walks towards us. And despite everything, my first impulse is to crawl backwards, away from the unnatural calm radiating from her. ------------- After reading yet another great older brothers/younger sister story, where the family gets reunited after years of separation, the sister keeps the secret that she was abused and assaulted all along, and the brothers conceal their work in the mafia, I decided to give it also a try. The output of my story was initially to turn this around with openness and unconditional support and the torture should happen right in front of their very eyes. Because no story is complete without the (un)necessary bloodshed, action, humour and, of course, a bad guy. And who knows, to throw everything completely upside down, the main character may not survive. I won't write warnings above each chapter, because most of them contain violence, blood, torture, etc. Constructive criticism is welcome. Ow, and English is not my first, second or third language. So if I mess up somewhere, let me know!

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