Head Held High
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Last published Tue, Dec 10, 2019
A murder mystery I'm doing for my English class and wanted to share. (Sorry if you really liked the first part, but I like this new direction for the story. If you really liked the old version, I can post what I had of it as a chapter just so you can see the difference. Sorry again.)
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