Just One Date With Adelaide
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  • Reads 412
  • Votes 4
  • Parts 13
  • Time 3h 25m
Ongoing, First published Oct 22, 2019
Adelaide was half my age and we were never supposed to fall in love. But oh my, did we ever! To complicate matters even worse, she lived thousands of miles away, her parents would never approve of me, and she was afraid to let herself be loved. Not exactly the best set of circumstances for a relationship.

She stole my heart and showed me that I could be loved again. But she loved me so much that she let me go. Now, I'm writing our story to win her back, with the hope that we can, at the very least, have our first real date. The problem is, I don't know where she is and I need your help to find her. 

This book is the amazing and true story of our relationship. It's an emotional story that will have you laughing, crying, dreaming, and hurting right along with us. I hope to use this story to find her and win her back.

Author's Notes:
I am a first time author compelled by love to write this story. This book is a gift to Adelaide and I will continue working on it until it is done. Please understand this book was written for the two of us. While I believe it is a wonderful story, and you are welcome to read it, understand that it does not follow the principles and best practices of writing a novel.

November 2019 Update: I was able to find Adelaide and used this book to win her back. Unfortunately the same problems existed and we only were able to last an additional 30 days. I can't continue this story knowing it will be for nothing. I may post things to Adelaide occasionally hoping she will come back to read it.

If you do choose to read it, I would love to hear your thoughts on our relationship and on the writing. I can't change the story itself, because it is a true story, but would appreciate knowing what makes it good and how I could tell it better. I am always happy to hear your feedback. 

J
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