On the Right Path
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Last published Thu, Sep 4, 2014
Marlee's had a good life. She's pretty popular, has some good friends, and goes to a good school. But lately she starts to become suspicious. Her life does NOT fit in in her family. She's started having dreams about a strange man in a dark suit - about him comforting her, pushing her on. She looks nothing like her mother or her annoying brother.
Her dreads come to life when the dark suited man comes and claims he is her father. She goes with him to his large mansion. There, she finds a mystery leading to some strange woods, her mother, and a secret that has never been uncovered. Can she find out why her mother vanished? Find out in "On the Right Path"!
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