The Heavenly Demonic God

The Heavenly Demonic God

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I would appreciate any criticism and revisions to make my story better, since I'm a fledgling author in the 11th Grade. I would also like to know what anyone thinks in the comments! ...... A betrayed peerless demonic cultivator named Fang Jun gets reincarnated in the body of a trash young master that shares his name when he gets stabbed in the back by the one he loves the most. The image belongs to it's owner for all intents and purposes.
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Jin, a user of ki and trained by his master, Roshio until a war broke out and his master died due to sacrificing himself to save Jin. Jin who was in tears vowed to get revenge of the bastards who had started this and killed his master, and his clan members. Being the only survivor of the Bone Structure Palace, The master had handed Jin a weapon to form a contract with. Offically being the master of an broken palace that no longer exists. What will he do to get his revenge? What is he willing to sacrifice for it. ------------ 1. I would like to firstly say that this is my first time writing, so don't expect everything to be perfect for a while. 2. This story is a slow/fast-paced reading. It'll have a mix of both. Some chapters will feel slower because it is, and others will feel faster because it is. 3. It does have romance in it and I wasn't sure to add cultivation because it's more like meditation and like ki gathering and things. However, after going through my thoughts, it was basically the same thing, so I just did it. 4. It's a little all over the place for I'd say the first 6-8 chapters maybe more? But It'll will slowly come together, hopefully... 5. If you do enjoy this, make sure to give it a review and ask other people to read! 6. If there are any questions at all, ask in the comments, and I'll be answering questions every 10 chapters.

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