Element Of Surprise
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Last published Tue, Jul 27, 2021
She ran away from the orphanage. Why?
People are going missing.
Noira takes matters in her own hands when her bestfriend goes missing. She asks and searches about her whereabouts but its like she disappeared into thin air. So then she sets off on to a train of events. But destiny leads her to an unknown world with fantasy and adventure. She struggles with clues and paths. But there are many who support her, especially him. And there are many secrets that are hidden in the dark.
Is it The Element Of Surprise? Or is it something else that will land her on an unknown path filled with thrill, love and war?
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"Who are you?", Noira asks clutching her sword and pointing it at him.
The man chuckles lightly and waves his hand. A million stars appear in the sky and his dark figure moves closer.
"I am and have always been here. I can hear you whenever you talk and read you like an open book. You cannot hide anything from me, darling. Nobody can.", he says chuckling at her as his eyes flash with a mysterious glint.
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#First Book in Element of Surprise series
Long way to go...
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