Small stories of my OCs

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I wanted to write this because I wanted to get the stories of my OCs out and see how I can improve them.  I might make individual stories depending on how much they are liked, but until then I will only release small bits of their stories. 
just so you guys know most of them will be fantasy based little to none will be human.
I do role play as my characters in eternal moon (roblox) so the area there will probably be mentioned.
This is my first time being serious in writing something like this so try to lay off the hate and stay respectful. I really want to get some critique off of this so please do.
If you ever want to use my OCs or any specific abilities/attributes I ask of you to get permission from me first.
                                                                          please try to enjoy it!All Rights Reserved

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Ash (sounds cliche but there's a reason)
Mon, Nov 4, 2019

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