A Vengeful Makeover
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Last published Sun, Nov 2, 2014
Hideously overweight. That's what Irene Savell was. Being 250 pounds gave her the access to unlimited bullying by the school's in-crowd. Keep in mind though, they aren't just your daily queenkas and kingkas, but a bunch of extremely spoilt brats who think they rule the world since the school is only meant for the rich.
But there is just so much pressure a girl could endure. Sick of all the non-stop bullying and snide comments she had to get through daily, she decided to have a makeover, and a vengeful one it is.The end of summer holidays not only signals the start of a new school term but also a newly changed Irene, who swores to put each and every one of them back into their own place, especially...Ryan Thorne, the school's jock and the one who makes her life a living hell. There's no way she's letting him out of it. The only comfort she has gained by dealing with all these shit is having a little crush on Nathan Vans , one of the few people who isn't mean to her. With a change in appearance and persona, will she gain Nathan's heart?
Revenge is sweet, but sometimes, it's too much.
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