Fixing Kingdom Hearts 3
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So this started as me trying to rewrite the kingdom hearts story. But as I went along trying to figure the best way to start the story I realized how much square really messed up on this. And nomura since he's the main guy after all. There are so many plot holes you wouldn't even imagine. Nd so many weird gaming mechanics that have no explanation. They also don't do there best characters justice and are lazy about the whole story planning and telling. So I'm turning this into me pulling out piece by piece of what works and doesn't work in the story of kingsom hearts 3 and just from looking at it now in order for my idea to work I will have to ignore some things from other games other wise it won't make sense. However once a figure out where the story is going I'll lost a book beginning a novel. For now this will be my notes on analyzing and deciding how to write the story.
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