Taking my breath away
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Last published Wed, Jul 30, 2014
hi my name is Liz this is my first fan fic so i hope I'm an okay writer and not too crappy.
This story is about a boy named Louise Tomlinsen who fell madly inlove with a girl named Allie Cinder. Allie is a lonesome girl in a small eerie town abandoned by her own parents left to live in an asylum that was used for orphan children who were "special " the towns full of secrets. The town has kept a secret from allie though when she was born in the black hills hospitol a lot of paranormal things kept happening. throughout allies life the paranormal followed her. allie saw what others could not and when she tried telling her parents at age 6 they thought she was crazy allies tried as hard as she could because she knew something was not right about it...but then after being brought to the church by her parents and forced to be bathed in holy water by the priest they decided it had already set in..allie had become a new demonic substance for the red devil himself and since allies parents were religious they felt they had no choice but to put her up for adoption...and there allies lived in the Asylum hoping for a breath of air to stop her suffocating sadness.
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