The commander
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Last published Fri, Aug 1, 2014
the "commander" in this story isn't the "commander" in the army. No,not this type. The type I am writting about is about a person who can command an object and move it according to his will. but not just one person. most people in this story posses diffrent amounts of power. those who have alot, those who have few and those who wish they had the opposite.
summary:
the story focusses on Emma-and her unbelievebly enourmas power-and her friends and her overly-attached brother.Since young age, Emma was completly ignored and shunned by the girls of her class who were jelous if her good looks, her exceptionly good grades abd her gorgoes brother, not to mention her long overflowing golden hair that attracts unnecessary attention-she really hated that- and of course her beautiful deep purple eyes.
see Emma as she struggles to keep her hidden secrets hidden as she struggles through life-this story starts out from when she was nine years old
please read and i reaaaaally hope ypu enjoy it.
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