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The commander
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Ongoing, First published Jul 30, 2014
the "commander" in this story isn't the "commander" in the army. No,not this type. The type I am writting about is about a person who can command an object and move it according to his will. but not just one person. most people in this story posses diffrent amounts of power. those who have alot, those who have few and those who wish they had the opposite.
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the story focusses on Emma-and her unbelievebly enourmas power-and her friends and her overly-attached brother.Since young age, Emma was completly ignored and shunned by the girls of her class who were jelous if her good looks, her exceptionly good grades abd her gorgoes brother, not to mention her long overflowing golden hair that attracts unnecessary attention-she really hated that- and of course her beautiful deep purple eyes.
see Emma as she struggles to keep her hidden secrets hidden as she struggles through life-this story starts out from when she was nine years old
please read and i reaaaaally hope ypu enjoy it.
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Indelible love

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I shut my locker and started making my way towards my next class . I was already late and the hallway was almost empty . I picked up my pace . Suddenly a loud thump came from behind me and an immense crushing pain seared through my back . I was slammed in the lockers . I closed my eyes from the sudden contact and pain . Opening my eyes I groaned . The breathe left me all at once . He was the one who pushed . His eyes held so many emotions . anger , hatred and betrayal . It pained me to see that I was the cause of them . Suddenly his fist came flying with full force towards my face and my eyes widened at the thought that he was going to hit me . I closed my eyes waiting for the impact but instead of breaking my face he punched the locker inches away from my face putting a dent on it . He smirked at me . All the colors drained from my face . " What did you thought that no one will know who you are ?" The moment the words left from his mouth I stiffened . He knew . Oh my god ! He knew ! His smirk even widened more when he saw the emotion in my eyes . Intense fear . I'm screwed . He pushed me more against the locker . It hurts in my back so much . A tear escaped from my eye and he smiled like he was enjoying it . " I know who you are and I'm going to make it hell for you , Emma." He said while clicking my name . He spoke with so much hatred and anger that it sent fear to the cores of my body . He once again slammed his fist in locker making the dent more visible and walked away leaving me in the fear. .................... Emma Parker , a 17 years old girl . She is a chocolaty brown eyes brunette. She is running from the scars that her past life gave her. Running from everything she knew . What happens when she tries move on from her past that is still haunting her ? ******** This is the first book that I'm going to write on wattpad . So I hope you guys like it . I hope you guys like the book.