Through and Through-First draft

Through and Through-First draft

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The life of a girl named Evelynn, narrated by an object that knew her better than she knew herself and saw the beauty that she carried, inside and out; the beauty that is in each and every one of us. Uploading chapter by chapter. Any comments, tips, or criticism is very much appreciated! Cover work is by Norman Rockwell - Lee Mace
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