The Echo of Rain

Andiron Garley Holten and Keith Evan Whiteraven have both lived in Teague, Texas their entire lives; in a neighborhood of mansions and people who live to be perfect, or at least pretend to be. Unfortunately for the two seventeen year olds, neither of them are perfect, and neither can ever live up to the standards set by those around them. So they spend their free time plotting against those they hate most, the people who take joy in hurting others in any way. They break into their houses, destroy their most precious and valuable items, and leave a little note explaining why, along with a single white feather. One day though, they take things too far and break into a house that has been abandoned for years, destroying the property of a person that they had never met, and who had done nothing wrong. They find a large, clear amber stone in a glass case, and once they break the glass and Andiron holds it up to his eyes, something goes wrong. As the nightmare unfolds and their wills are tested, Keith tries to get his friend back, and Andiron tries not to forget who he is, and what he was ever fighting for...
WARNING: This will contain both physical and emotional child and animal abuse, I will try to include a warning but sometimes I do forget or write things I did not plan to write. My apologies for any inconveniences or emotional distress. Please enjoy though and comment if you have any ideas or advice/constructive criticism, all are welcome :) (and if you do enjoy, don't forget to vote!)