The Deep
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(This is the first real story I've ever written, but I've been writing it for 2 years. This is also the first book in a series of 6 which is why there is some stuff which might not make sense yet.)
Harper lost everything the day her mother died, she only had her sister. So when they tried to escape their war torn country she prays it is the new start she had been hoping for. But after their boat crashes and an encounter with some dangerous magic she finds herself in a whole different world, as a mer-creature! She joined an elite group of humans-turned mer creatures called Shadow. Harper learns how to fight Mirage, a group who wishes to unleash monsters on the land and sea, and makes some amazing friends. But it seems there is more under the surface, and things definitely aren't smooth sailing when the gates are unlocked and the monsters are unleashed, because they started a war, and they have to protect the ocean.
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