I Love You, Jane Doe: The Commemoration Version
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"I Love You, Jane Doe; The Commemoration Version" is an updated version of the original staged play "I Love You, Jane Doe" after it went through numerous changes, public and private showcases and feedback
This version stays true to the original storyline and the main plot has not been drastically changed but certain lines of dialogue have been cut to better suit a more matured audience but also to better fit a more modern viewing. The original version is still and will always be accessible, this is just considered a better and more updated version to the original and is in no way replacing the first version
The Commemoration Version has also been made to be in-line with events that have happened so far in the real world this staged play is based on
Jane... you made me this unstable person. You made me chase you around for three years and then throw me in the gutter, you made me who I am and... I don't think I can stop it... I can't stop loving you
I would have loved to take care of you. Keep you warm when the cold bitter winters come whistling away and kiss you on those tender lips when the nice clear summer skies roll out across the Heavens. I would have protected you from every threat known to mankind and would have supported you through each decision you made
But it seems you don't see the same way I do. And I... can't see you anymore
I love you Jane, I always have...
Written by: Brendon Thearle
The Commemoration Version by: Brendon Thearle
Classification: PG-13
Play © 2017/2019 - Brendon Thearle, all rights reserved. No copyright infringement intended!
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