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A Gentle Torment
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Ongoing, First published Nov 23, 2019
Mature
Bai Qian had little in the way of a plan when she left Kunlun Mountain.

20,000 years after his disciple's disappearance, Mo Yuan and Ye Hua stumble across a small hut and unknowingly set off a chain of events that alter their fates (and those around them) forever.

(Set in a universe where the golden lotus withered well before BQ became MY's disciple. The age gap between BQ and BFJ  is significantly shorter than in the drama for the sake of continuity. The kicker? BQ, MY, and YH all end up happy (and together) in the end. Dong Hua and Bai Feng Jiu don't act like kicked puppies, either.)
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What if our Dreams were far more exciting than our reality. This is a Mo Yuan and Bai Qian love story told from a completely different perspective. Mo Yuan is only five thousand years older than Bai Qian whereas Zhe Yan is the same age as in the Drama. Ye Hua does not exist in this story. All characters in this story have been borrowed from the Chinese Drama Series, Ten Miles of Peach Blossoms and remain the property of the production crew, writers, screen writers and whoever else put the best Drama ever to come out of China together.