A Gentle Torment
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Bai Qian had little in the way of a plan when she left Kunlun Mountain.
20,000 years after his disciple's disappearance, Mo Yuan and Ye Hua stumble across a small hut and unknowingly set off a chain of events that alter their fates (and those around them) forever.
(Set in a universe where the golden lotus withered well before BQ became MY's disciple. The age gap between BQ and BFJ is significantly shorter than in the drama for the sake of continuity. The kicker? BQ, MY, and YH all end up happy (and together) in the end. Dong Hua and Bai Feng Jiu don't act like kicked puppies, either.)
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