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  • Reads 91,169
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  • Parts 25
  • Time 3h 36m
Complete, First published Sep 06, 2012
** This was one of the first ever fanfictions I wrote - It will always hold a special place in my heart and I'm sad that I was never able to finish it. However, over time my writing style and knowledge has changed and it's not something I can now continue which I regret a lot. Thank you to everyone who has ever read, commented or voted on this story, you are the reason I kept writing all these years and I couldn't be more thankful!**


MarieLotte has very kindly agreed to edit my story, go find her and check out her stories, they are AMAZING!!!

Steve McGarrett hasn't has had the best of starts, he lost his mother when he was young, so his father shipped him of to the mainland along with his sister on separate flights. When he becomes a SEAL his father was killed while he is on the phone talking to the killer who he manages to kill later on. But everything seems to change when he meets a quirky Marine by the name of Sapphire O'Loughlin, everything seems so much better. When Jamie finally comes back to Hawaii, Life is on the up for Steve; but how long will it last? Sapphire O'loughlin is a US Marine but she's getting board of the Californian experience. So like a normal person she transfers to Hawaii; but it isn't how its made out to be because on her first day she's caught up in a bank heist, then she's rejected by the one person she thought cared about her even if it was only a little bit. Everyone has skeletons in the closet, Sapphire more than others and when these skeletons come back and haunted her things may just wrong. But when she meets a Navy SEAL who is nothing but good to her things may just brighten up for once and a family may come out of all of it.
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