You Were My First
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Hello it's me you're author suggi today i have reamde the story you were my first cause i didn't like how anything in the story came out and i as rushing things and also toxic people were in my way half of the time today I'll give you the full story no cuts or anything also thank you for jasmine for being an amazing editor and my feedback person in my book ahs has helped and made me be inspired on writing and she's the person that kept me motivated in many things like my writing and i would just love to thank her from the bottom of my heart any who so hope you like the new remade story of you were my first because the first one wasn't the very best of my work the chapter will end on chapter twenty five hope you enjoy the 2021 remake of
You Were My First
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