Into the Parallel

bum1996

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Parts 2
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Reads 25
Votes 1
Parts 2
Time 8m

bum1996

Mature

He had lived his entire life in this house, but he was standing in a hallway he had never seen before.


Please oh please give me feedback. I don't know if this is good or not. Criticism is greatly appreciated.All Rights Reserved

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