A Spark of Rebellion
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Just a short story I wrote for my government class, teachers that let you do creative writing for projects are the best!! I suck at descriptions but i'll do my best. It's a short Utopian dystopian story written in journal and log form. I'm a bit of novice writer so please leave constructive criticism, it would be very appreciated!
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