- Work in Progress -
~Also I'm 15, so I'm not the best writer~
From the Marauders' life at Hogwarts through Harry's life there, however, his parents live.
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***You don't have to read any of the rest to understand; just info of what I'm working with here if you'd like 😂 ***
- I'm trying to be as canon as possible and constructive criticism is encouraged because I'm also trying to learn more about the characters so if there's anything that someone knows is different, except for aspects that aren't specified or the facts that Harry's parents live, then PLEASE tell me. -
- First story -
In the first story, It's the marauders life at Hogwarts, it may be a bit rushed right now because I'm still trying to find the most accurate timeline and character personalities, but I will eventually go back and add more in between the time gaps.
This is the main part that I want feedback on because there isn't as much information as I need for a most-accurate fanfic. If anyone has a timeline for 1st-4th year that would be helpful because there's only a few events and no specified time. >~<
- Second story -
In the second story, It's Harry's life at Hogwarts, but his parents survive.
For this part I don't need as much feedback at all, because of the fact that his parents are alive. This creates major plot holes throughout everything, which is why I'm writing the entire series over. The plot will change a lot because of all of these, so I'm obviously not striving for canon in this part, therefore any of that kind of feedback won't be necessary, but still!! If anyone has any feedback/constructive criticism that they think can help the story on my part then please do tell, I need it, just stressing the fact that the second part isn't meant to be canon!! :))
~ Sorry this was so long! ~
Thanks so much and hope you enjoy!! I'm proud of it even tho not many ppl have read! ❤️
~ also author's notes will be like this ~ just in case
Noor, a dancer in the Royal Court of the Al-Yauzhan Empire wants nothing more than to pay off her debts and lead a nice, simple life-but a chance encounter with the crown prince and his brother brings her into the dangerous world of court politics. As Noor and the princes investigate their uncle and cousin's possible treason, she grows closer to the crown prince, but in order to save the kingdom and the person she loves, Noor will have to risk everything...
A romantic adventure set in an imagined Arabic kingdom, THE DANCING GIRL is a story of court intrigues, romantic entanglements, and secret meetings as Noor and her best friend Amir try to help the princes they're falling for expose corrupt court officials with plans to seize the throne. Noor and Amir are close to having everything they've ever dreamed of...now all they need to do is survive.