Zephyr
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Hey guys. This is just a part of a story I am currently writing and it is under major construction, so expect me to edit chapters continuously. This is my very first piece so it may not be incredible. However I am going to be doing a lot of work on it so you should hopefully see a lot more in the future. A bit of background on the main character in the story: Jaymes Braddock is a young lord of Ysgar, a large hold in the western parts of Aardìn. His father was lord over Valöreon Hall, a castle at the heart of Ysgar. Jaymes was born with the mark of the Zephyr, a strange silver and white marking on his back moving from his left shoulder to above his heart. This is marking symbolises his unique ability to control the eastern and western winds. At the age of 13, his father was murdered by an unknown person in the dead of night. Jaymes swore he would find the murderer and avenge his father's death. To do so, he found a clan of assassins who were loyal to his father and learned their ancient art. He quickly rose through their ranks, earning the title of Qrelle, the assassins' word for Master. So yeah, I hope you enjoy it and that you give me some good feedback!
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This story is complete, though incomplete. For elaboration, I have completed it how I wanted it, in the sense of me working and chipping away at it to get it printed off for my father to read, seeing as he wanted to read, edit, and attempt to get it published (He had called a publishing company the other day about it). Incomplete in the sense that I don't have all the scenes I really want now more than I did when I was in the process of writing it. For example, in the previous chapter one, there was a small scene that had Aaren, Travis, Loyd, Scott, Gabe, and Xander fighting in Lord Sylvie's house. I had changed it so that they moved outside, seeing as I imagined Sylvie's house as a small, quaint house, so it would only make sense that they all fought OUTSIDE instead of INSIDE. Also incomplete in the sense that I strongly dislike the way I wrote it. I've gotten some 'inspiration' from my dad about (spoiler) killing her in the end, so I came back to change it before we went into really editing the pages (grammar, spelling, etc). That's all I really wanted to communicate with you guys, so if you remember something specific about the previous book, I changed it because I disliked how it wrote it. Hope you enjoy it for what it is otherwise. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ A young girl, Shadow Gillian Wagner, avoids Rosewood at all costs. In fact, she avoids all villages, expect for one that changed her. Shadow, and her two companions, Xander and Gabe, had been taken to Acorntop village, where they have good and bad moments, love and war. Though 'war', might literally. What will happen on this interesting adventure of the girl and her friends? Find out in 'Shadow Wagner the Slayer; Book 1 (Do I Belong?)'

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