A Young Soldier (unfinished)

I haven't finished this yet and it needs A LOT of editing. Don't mind the horrible grammar :)
This is just a rough draft :) (if it has a * next to it.. it means it needs a new word to replace it, Ect) you won't understand the begging of it because it's a part of a twist ;) but you will when I finish it. Please no hate or anything.. Feedback would be nice. I hope you like it. My grandma, who passed away last month inspired me to write this. I have been doing writing on and off since I was a young child and my grandma would help me and teach me how to write stories. This Is for you grandma, I love you.