The Hindrance to Utopia

The Hindrance to Utopia

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Seventeen-year-old Jonah lives in near-utopia. He wants revenge on a religious hatemonger cell, who is plotting the overthrow of the world government and who brainwashed his father. A sinister new teacher enters his life, threatening Jonah's dream of entering his society's Elite Forces. But Jonah soon believes that the new teacher wants to brainwash him too.
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