A Dad's unconditional love

HEY!!
Ok so first thank you for clicking on this. Next, this is kinda my first story, I wrote one before but I didn't really like it so I stopped. (It didn't really do well but I think that's my fault lol) anywho, I'm not quite sure how this is going to turn out so sum advice would be great! This story is hopefully going to be a kidnapped kind of story but I'm not too sure how well I can write that kind of stuff. Ok, this is getting too long so see you in the book!!!

I don't own any of the characters or the art but I own the plot.