Beginning of The Way
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Last published Tue, Aug 5, 2014
A fictional story about an orphan named Jack as he adventures throughout his homeland, Aljorick. Jack has powers but knows not how to control them. Aljorick is protected by the Sacred Stone's powers to do anything, but no one knows how to harness the power. What does Aljorick need to be protected from? The Outsiders who are brutal savages outside of the magical forcefield of the Stone. This last line of defense is an impenetrable forcefield that keeps the brutes out of the safety provided by the Stone. The leader of the Outsiders, Oridicus has control of the rest of the world, but not Aljorick, and he is willing to do anything to get in. Legend has it that if the Stone is taken out of Aljorick, the forcefield will collapse. Then, Oridicus will be able to invade with his 13 million man army, which he has captured as slaves and as soldiers from all corners of the world. Jack has to venture with his friends Ridon and Asaron, to find who his parents are and to find who he is.
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