The Promise
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how long a love can be lasts...?
until marriage....?or until the children born...? or until the death..?
here is the story the love survives to the next incarnation to complete it's promise...
Meet Mr.Jai Rathor (28) CEO of multinational company and the only heir of Rathor industry.'Most eligible bachelor of India ' an article published by ' Indian's today magazine' .living example of ruthless cold-hearted person and Playboy who broke countless girls heart after used them.if he want anything he will get it by hook or crook ..he never fails in his life but he fails to keep his promise that he made to 'HER' nit as a jai but as " VIJAY"...
here,Tara(22) the South Indian middle class girl who lives a normal life style and also dreamt for a peaceful family which is she already got by God grace.. recently completed her college studies and got placed in reputed organization.princess for family.she does all naughty thing and little shy type not so brave .scared for outsiders it's because of her family, there never let her to face the really world that she really want to..
both of them have no idea about one another but still there is a thing which they both owns and that's 'THE PROMISE'
hi everyone,
this is my first ever story...please forgive if you found any grammar mistakes . English is not my first language.you can suggest your idea about the story and opinion about my writting skill .hope you guyz like my story ..
my special thanks to arathu adithya for motivating me
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