Hold Your Breath
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Ongoing9m
Last published Tue, Aug 5, 2014
This is a short story that I've kind of just thrown together. It's not finished yet and it's still in a rough draft state with little to no editing. But give me your feedback on the overall story. And I apologize for capitalization and punctuation errors, I'll fix those later on.
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