WIERD poems or something?

This is my first actual story so...i don't know if you'll like or it if it's your cup of tea. But I personally hope you do hope it makes you think about certain things. If you can comment if you want to give advice, I would really appreciate it love to know what you guys think. if you want to vote, you can but only if think it's worthy of your taste. again thank you for anyone who reads it. I would really like to continue sharing my stories and stuff only if you guys like it. if not...oh well😅.