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Trust Me // Zach Herron
<completed> Well..... READ IT LIMELIGHTS!!! <contains cursing> Update: I was really young when I wrote this so the grammar is gonna be bad, Im working on it don't come at me!! Im sorryyy. ← Rankings → #504 whydontwe #158 whydontwe #81 whydontwe #167 zachherron #62 zachherron #1 zachherron {I'm crying!}Lengkap
The Standouts - A Critique Contest by PAULAPDX (Summer 2019 Edition)
🛑 - CLOSED until 2021. ***If you're interested in my critiques, you might want to check out my weekly newsletter for opportunities to get a personalized critique. https://paula.substack.com/p/coming-soon Does your work stand out in an overly-crowded landscape? Does your story & writing shine as far as: ★ - Concept ★ - Voice ★ - Storytelling The Standouts is a fun, but hopefully helpful contest that can give you a sense of whether your story resonates with someone who's got some experience under her belt. Great! But who are you to judge? Fair question. This is not to humble-brag, but I've been critiquing and have worked with story development for quite some time, and I've picked up a lot along the way. ☙ - As an Ambassador, I work on content projects. ☙ - If you look at my profile, you'll see everything I've published so far has managed to standout in one way or another, whether by leading me to become a Wattpad Star; or by winning a Watty (twice!); or by being picked as a Top 10 in major Wattpad contests (twice!); or being featured. All I'm saying is I'm no slouch. I'm not brilliant either. But I've got some experience around what can catch an agent, editor, or judge's eye, and I'd like to share that with the community. ☙ - In another lifetime, I used to work for HBO in Development and at ICM (the talent agency) in their writers' department which means I understand how professionals quickly gauge whether or not they'll take a closer look at a work and/or make an offer. This kind of insight can be helpful if you're planning to submit your work or even just want to stand out more here on Wattpad. ☙ - I used to provide critiques for three writers, all of them traditionally published. They seemed to value my insight. Read the RULES, LOGISTICS & PRIZES chapter for guidelines. All entries get a brief assessment of their first chapter, with winners getting more extensive critiques. Sound interesting? Give it a go! 😊Lengkap![story review shop [[ discontinued ]]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/153731757-256-k824772.jpg)
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Have you been searching for someone to give their honest opinion on your work? Are you browsing review books to find the next story you'll fall in love with? Me too, bro. The reviews are 100% free for those willing to have their stories criticized, and my reviews are 100% honest with a hint of sweetness to soften things up. Please, come on in and request. Give me something new to read. Give me something /good/ to read.Lengkap
SAFE HOUSE (Creepypasta x reader) rewrite
i do not own any of the characters in this story they belong to there rightful owners and you belong to you. i am not good with description's so i suggest you read it, it's is a good story and reader discretion is advised that there is violence and swearing in this story. This is a transfer from my other account here on wattpad and the account name was @ShirleyCarpenter so please do not report this i am just transfering it over to this account because i can't log on with my facebook account sorry for the inconvenience.Lengkap
Call of Duty: Incorrect Quotes! (PART 2)
𝘽𝙊𝙊𝙆 𝙄𝙄 𝙊𝙁 𝘾𝘼𝙇𝙇 𝙊𝙁 𝘿𝙐𝙏𝙔 𝙄𝙉𝘾𝙊𝙍𝙍𝙀𝘾𝙏 𝙌𝙐𝙊𝙏𝙀𝙎 Quotes and conversations of your favourite characters from the CoD universe! 𝘔𝘰𝘴𝘵𝘭𝘺 𝘣𝘢𝘴𝘦𝘥 𝘰𝘯 𝘔𝘰𝘥𝘦𝘳𝘯 𝘞𝘢𝘳𝘧𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘴𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘴! .. 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳 𝘨𝘢𝘮𝘦 𝘴𝘦𝘳𝘪𝘦𝘴? • 𝙄𝙣𝙘𝙡𝙪𝙙𝙚𝙨: 𝚃𝚊𝚜𝚔 𝙵𝚘𝚛𝚌𝚎 𝟷𝟺𝟷/𝚂𝚙𝚎𝚌𝚒𝚊𝚕 𝙰𝚒𝚛 𝚂𝚎𝚛𝚟𝚒𝚌𝚎𝚜: - 𝙲𝚊𝚙𝚝𝚊𝚒𝚗 𝙹𝚘𝚑𝚗 𝙿𝚛𝚒𝚌𝚎 - 𝙹𝚘𝚑𝚗 "𝚂𝚘𝚊𝚙" 𝙼𝚊𝚌𝚝𝚊𝚟𝚒𝚜𝚑 - 𝚂𝚒𝚖𝚘𝚗 "𝙶𝚑𝚘𝚜𝚝" 𝚁𝚒𝚕𝚎𝚢 - 𝙶𝚊𝚛𝚢 "𝚁𝚘𝚊𝚌𝚑" 𝙰𝚗𝚍𝚎𝚛𝚜𝚘𝚗 -𝚂𝚎𝚛𝚐𝚎𝚊𝚗𝚝 𝙺𝚢𝚕𝚎 "𝙶𝚊𝚣" 𝙶𝚊𝚛𝚛𝚒𝚌𝚔 - 𝙲𝚊𝚙𝚝. 𝙼𝚊𝚌𝙼𝚒𝚕𝚕𝚒𝚊𝚗 - 𝚂𝚐𝚝. 𝚆𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚌𝚛𝚘𝚏𝚝 - 𝚂𝚐𝚝. 𝙶𝚛𝚒𝚏𝚏𝚒𝚗 (𝚒𝚗𝚌𝚕𝚞𝚍𝚒𝚗𝚐 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝟸𝟶𝟷𝟿 𝙼𝚆 𝚜𝚘𝚘𝚗!) 𝚄𝚕𝚝𝚛𝚊𝚗𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚘𝚗𝚊𝚕𝚒𝚜𝚝𝚜: - 𝚅𝚕𝚊𝚍𝚒𝚖𝚒𝚛 𝙰. 𝙼𝚊𝚔𝚊𝚛𝚘𝚟 - 𝚈𝚞𝚛𝚒 - 𝙰𝚗𝚊𝚝𝚘𝚕𝚢 - 𝙺𝚒𝚛𝚒𝚕 - 𝙻𝚎𝚟 - 𝚅𝚒𝚔𝚝𝚘𝚛 - 𝙸𝚖𝚛𝚊𝚗 𝚉𝚊𝚔𝚊𝚑𝚎𝚟 - 𝚅𝚒𝚔𝚝𝚘𝚛 𝚉𝚊𝚔𝚊𝚑𝚎𝚟 𝙾𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛𝚜: - 𝙼𝚢 𝙾𝙲, 𝚂𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚕𝚎𝚝 𝚂𝚑𝚒𝚙 𝚒𝚗𝚌𝚕𝚞𝚍𝚎𝚍: - 𝚂𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚔𝚊𝚛𝚘𝚟 (𝚂𝚌𝚊𝚛𝚕𝚎𝚝 𝚡 𝙼𝚊𝚔𝚊𝚛𝚘𝚟) 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚖𝚊𝚗𝚢 𝚖𝚘𝚛𝚎..!Lengkap
𝐀𝐋𝐅𝐀𝐀𝐙 𝐭𝐡𝐞 𝐮𝐧𝐝𝐞𝐧𝐢𝐚𝐛𝐥𝐞 𝐜𝐨𝐮𝐩𝐥𝐞
'𝐕𝐨𝐰𝐬 𝐨𝐟 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞' 𝐛𝐨𝐨𝐤 𝐨𝐧𝐞 ────୨ৎ──── 𝐑𝐮𝐡𝐚𝐧𝐢𝐤𝐚 𝐬𝐡𝐚𝐫𝐦𝐚 ────୨ৎ──── 𝐀 𝐠𝐢𝐫𝐥 𝐰𝐡𝐨 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐡𝐚𝐯𝐞 𝐡𝐨𝐩𝐞𝐬 𝐢𝐧 𝐥𝐨𝐯𝐞 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐰𝐡𝐚𝐭 𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐡𝐚𝐩𝐩𝐞𝐧 𝐰𝐡𝐞𝐧 𝐬𝐡𝐞 𝐰𝐢𝐥𝐥 𝐛𝐞 𝐚 𝐫𝐞𝐩𝐥𝐚𝐜𝐞 𝐛𝐫𝐢𝐝𝐞 " 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘺𝘰𝘶 𝘵𝘰𝘭𝘥 𝘮𝘦 𝘵𝘰 𝘨𝘪𝘷𝘦 𝘪𝘵 𝘢 𝘤𝘩𝘢𝘯𝘤𝘦" ˚˖𓍢ִ໋✧˚ 𝐄𝐤𝐚𝐧𝐬𝐡 𝐫𝐚𝐠𝐮𝐯𝐚𝐧𝐬𝐡𝐢 ────୨ৎ──── 𝐓𝐡𝐞 𝐲𝐨𝐮𝐧𝐠𝐞𝐬𝐭 𝐛𝐮𝐬𝐢𝐧𝐞𝐬𝐬𝐦𝐚𝐧 𝐛𝐮𝐭 𝐧𝐨𝐭 𝐢𝐧 𝐨𝐧𝐥𝐲 𝐈𝐧𝐝𝐢𝐚 𝐢𝐧 𝐧𝐞𝐰 𝐘𝐨𝐫𝐤 𝐚𝐥𝐬𝐨 "𝘠𝘰𝘶 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘯𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘪𝘯𝘨 𝘫𝘶𝘴𝘵 𝘢 𝘳𝘦𝘱𝘭𝘢𝘤𝘦 𝘣𝘳𝘪𝘥𝘦 𝘧𝘰𝘳 𝘮𝘦" ────୨ৎ──── Starting: 14/02/2024 Ending: 05/11/2024
A Shattered Life (Countryhuman) OwU
!Warning! This story contains bullying, suicidal thoughts/actions, abuse, self-harm and A LOT of blood, you have been warned. This story is NOT meant to be offensive or embarrassing to anyone! I only do this for fun. This story also has NOTHING to do with my other stories on Wattpad. So don't worry about reading the other two because this story is just one by its self. The cover and plot for this story were all made by me! :3 I hope you guys and girls enjoy, this is the first story I've done all by myself soooo... let's see where this goes! :D Oh! And by the way, since this is a completely different story the characters in it may have other personalities or do certain actions that they would never do in my other stories. OwULengkap
Mackenzie's Critique Shop
[PERMANENTLY CLOSED] Want a genuine reader and helpful critiques? In this shop, I offer you helpful advice and outlook on your book, all while commenting and voting! I try my best to read everything in your story, and provide as helpful outlooks on it as I can. Check inside for more details. ... [] OPEN [] CLOSED FOR CATCH UP [] HIATUS [!] PERMANENTLY CLOSEDLengkap
<completed> Well..... READ IT LIMELIGHTS!!! <contains cursing> Update: I was really young when I wrote this so the grammar is gonna be bad, Im working on it don't come at me!! Im sorryyy. ← Rankings → #504 whydontwe #158 whydontwe #81 whydontwe #167 zachherron #62 zachherron #1 zachherron {I'm crying!}
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