✔️LONGING HEARTS. His Quest To Mend Her Heart (Completed)
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  • Reads 271,271
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  • Parts 36
  • Time 6h 49m
Complete, First published Dec 27, 2019
This is a Story of Her hate and his love. 
It's a war between hate and love... 

Saad loved only and only Rimsha but Rimsha loved only and only Maaz. 

It's a war between two hearts which got connected by the bond of Nikkah. 

A bond which can mend any heart.... 
But.... 

That was Rimsha's heart, which wasn't as soft as wax but hard as a rock. 

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"Rimsha" She was stopped by Saad's call, and turned to saw him, his back was facing her, and he didn't bother to turned to saw her 

"Now what is remaining?" She asked with tear filled eyes and shaking voice. 

"Agar aaj Jaogi to wapas aane ke sare raaste band karke jaogi, soch samajh kar fesla karna" Saad said while crushing the remaining piece of his cigarette, and turned to look at her. 

(If you go today, you will close all the paths to come back, decide wisely)

"Tumne to hamesha fesle hi sunaye hain, pehle shadi karne ka, ab shadi khatam karne ka. Tumhe Mere fesle ki kya zarurat hai?" Rimsha said while going towards side table of bed to drew out her car keys 

(You have always told the decisions, first to get married, now to end the marriage. Why do you need my decision?)

"Lekin is baar fesla tumhara hai" Saad said without looking at her and her eyes shaded some tears, which she suddenly wiped. 

(but this time decision is yours) 

"I.. I'm going" She said in hushed tone and grabbed the handle of her suitcase to step out from the room.

''Tumhe divorce papers aur tumhara mehr jald hi mil jayega" Saad said while closing his eyes and clenching his hands in fists. 

(You will receive your dower and divorce papers soon)

"I w-will wait for the same" she said with shivering voice and open the door and stepped out.

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Will Saad got success in mending her heart or that's too late?


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