✔️LONGING HEARTS. His Quest To Mend Her Heart (Completed)
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  • Reads 270,291
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  • Parts 36
  • Time 6h 49m
Complete, First published Dec 27, 2019
This is a Story of Her hate and his love. 
It's a war between hate and love... 

Saad loved only and only Rimsha but Rimsha loved only and only Maaz. 

It's a war between two hearts which got connected by the bond of Nikkah. 

A bond which can mend any heart.... 
But.... 

That was Rimsha's heart, which wasn't as soft as wax but hard as a rock. 

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"Rimsha" She was stopped by Saad's call, and turned to saw him, his back was facing her, and he didn't bother to turned to saw her 

"Now what is remaining?" She asked with tear filled eyes and shaking voice. 

"Agar aaj Jaogi to wapas aane ke sare raaste band karke jaogi, soch samajh kar fesla karna" Saad said while crushing the remaining piece of his cigarette, and turned to look at her. 

(If you go today, you will close all the paths to come back, decide wisely)

"Tumne to hamesha fesle hi sunaye hain, pehle shadi karne ka, ab shadi khatam karne ka. Tumhe Mere fesle ki kya zarurat hai?" Rimsha said while going towards side table of bed to drew out her car keys 

(You have always told the decisions, first to get married, now to end the marriage. Why do you need my decision?)

"Lekin is baar fesla tumhara hai" Saad said without looking at her and her eyes shaded some tears, which she suddenly wiped. 

(but this time decision is yours) 

"I.. I'm going" She said in hushed tone and grabbed the handle of her suitcase to step out from the room.

''Tumhe divorce papers aur tumhara mehr jald hi mil jayega" Saad said while closing his eyes and clenching his hands in fists. 

(You will receive your dower and divorce papers soon)

"I w-will wait for the same" she said with shivering voice and open the door and stepped out.

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Will Saad got success in mending her heart or that's too late?


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SADQA-E-ZINDAGI

28 parts Complete

Mehrul a 19 year old Sameer 25 years old She hates him but her heart doesn't He doesn't hate her but his heart want something more They had some tragedies From cousins to a couple Their life surely took a turn But the turn they took was a good one just a few overly dramatic problems You can't complete a quest without a few hurdles🫶🏻 -------------- 'MEHRUL WHO IS HE' sameer yelled 'HES NO ONE I ALREADY TOLD YOU' Mehrul yelled back 'Tell me one thing do you love me' he asked with tears in his eyes 'Are you really suspecting my love for you' she had tears in her eyes as well Hopefully only sameer Murat,saad,her mom Amal and hamad were watching Nobody else knew 'YES I AM BECAUSE I CAN SEE IT WHY ARE YOU WITH HIM' sameer held mehrul wrist tightly making her wince in pain 'Why you can have girlfriends and go out with them and I can't even a guy friends' she said He doesn't even trust her even after these years he's the same *thwack* a slap made its way to her cheek She was standing there with her hand on her cheek And Sameer ran out of the house Tears flowing out of her eyes 'Baba' she said looking at her father He came forwards He gulped 'Is this you' Ahmed asked his daughter 'Yes baba but-' another slap made its way before she could complete ..................... 'Mehrul open up please I'm sorry' he yelled constantly banging the door He was drowned with guilt How could he do something like that 'Hatt' hamad pushed sameer away and knocked a little softer 'Mehrul please khol do' he said loud enough for mehrul to hear 'Acha nhi Kia aap logo ne' saad to ahmed and Sameer Their heads were already lowered Ahmed doubted his own daughter The one whom he brought up with such love and he doubted his own upbringing