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TAKEN (Rewritten 2025) Short Story

TAKEN (Rewritten 2025) Short Story

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WpMetadataNoticeLast published Wed, Aug 6, 2014
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She heard a soft pitter patter from the floor. She lost her one sense. Her sense of sight because of the thick blindfold covering her eyes. She cannot see anything. So she just heightened her sense of hearing. She tried her best to hear everything. Where that soft pitter patter came from. In which direction. But she is clueless. All she feels now is fear and cold. She can feel someone staring at her. Staring to her soul intensely. Devouring her image. And suddenly she heard a soft... Click. A camera shutter sound. Her body acted before she could even think. She tried to scramble to cover her body- but she couldn't. She cannot move her hands. Both of her hands are tied from both different opposite directions. She tried to pull her feet but her ankles are tied as well. Fuck. She tried to scream. She tried to muffle a sound but to no avail. She cannot. She cannot say anything. All she can do is drool from the cloth inside her mouth. She is tied up. From hands to her ankle. She knows she is naked... bare and open. Rewritten: 10/14/2025 As I double check my account i have found some fucked up stories-- stories a teenager shouldn't write-- but of course me as an even complete fucked up person now after few years and being adult-- i will write more even fucked up story. Sometimes my friends will read my works and mention that they can sponsor my therapy of how fucked up i am. and this one is this. Dont come to me. God forbid a virgin girl with a playful imagination.
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Due to my infuriated state, I drove like a mad man and almost got into trouble with the authorities. Fortunately I solely got a slap on the wrist, perhaps the cop that had me pull over was having a great day. Instead of going home, I drove past my house, and headed straight to the bar. The intention was to drink my problems and the rage brewing inside of me away, but I actually fought and annihilated the demons that tempted me to drink alcohol again. I got home late, and peculiarly I wasn't famished but my wife had cooked so I felt compelled to eat. "Is your hands not working or something?" She asked, after I ate and left the plate on the sink. "You want me to work them on you?" I asked, headlessly. "No stupid. I want you to wash your plate after eating." She gritted her teeth, folding her cute hands into fists and if I wasn't so mad at her I would've found it stimulating. "I have a wife for a reason. She's able and willing." "Bullshit!" She sneered. "I'm assuming the plate is still dirty then?" "No." She lowered her voice. "So what is your fucking problem?" I asked, firmly. "My problem is you having shit to say to me yet choosing not to say it." she crossed her amrs, her gorgeous face painted with anticipation. That's when it dawned on me that my wife was gorgeous to me, no matter what state I was in. Literally and figuratively. "Fine." I took slow steps towards her. "I don't know if you've noticed but I don't have anybody. My dad is a dick with herpes, my best friend is a dick intoxicated idiot, and I cut my brother off. I guess I may have been a dick too to a certain extent. My point is that you're my only ally and I can't afford to have you as a weak link." I concluded sternly, and tears started streaming down her face, making me want to take a steel knife and shove it in my chest.

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