The Order
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Last published Thu, Oct 1, 2020
When a family is stricken by terrible tragedy, the destinies of two brothers are split, and they begin to recognize the true power and influence they have within.
In a crumbling world racked with war, corruption, and failing religion, these brothers hold the fate of much more than they realized.
All writing is my original, copywrited work. The picture used for the front cover is not mine, though I did modify it for the cover
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