Metanoia ✔
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'She was huffing and sweating profusely. Her eyes filled with tears of pain and agony. She cried incessantly calling her mother and father's name.
"Mumma..Papa.."
She found herself on the hospital bed. Her whole family consoled her.
Suddenly, a pair of hands embraced her. Feeling uncomfortable, she pushed the person.
"Who are you?"
With puffy eyes, she shouted making everyone shock.
"It's me..Dear..your husband.."
His eyes filled with tears.
Her mother and father told her but she refused to even recognise him.
"I don't even know you! And How can you call yourself as my hus- husband?
I NEVER MARRIED!"
Making everyone fill with astonishment, she shouted which echoed in the whole room. He stood rooted after her confession.'
How will you feel when after an accident your close one, refuse to even recognise, when you love that person with all your heart?
When you have done various sacrifices and still his/her's words pang your heart?
Metanoia is a greek word which means...The journey of changing one's heart,mind,self or way of life.
Will Siddhant be able to bring her back? Or fate has some other plans?
Join the journey of the leads,Siddhant and Avyakta to know further!
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