Lithium: A Stardust Crusaders Story

I basically made this as a self insert bc I'm lonely and love Jotaro... So the main character is August Conley and she has a stand and a cool best friend who helps her kick ass. I'm not great at writing, especially not reader inserts, but please give this story a read and tell me what you think. If people like it enough, I might do an xreader version.

I don't own Jjba but I do own the few characters I created for this story, mainly August, Lynn, and Jackson. I don't own the concept of stands but I did create an original stand for this story, River Queen, and my brother made the stand Dave Matthews Band.
Also, this is basically the subtitles from VRV with a few changes and add-ins from my own characters. this story is a glorified Jotaro x female OC and I have no shame.
oh boy would you look at that. I saved myself an introduction page by putting it all in the description yeahh
I also will try to update at least weekly and feedback is welcome and encouraged! I'm always trying to improve my writing, so any constructive criticism is taken gratefully, albeit with a grain of salt. Please don't just leave hateful comments without any points of improvement, though. I know this is the internet, but I'm pretty sensitive to flat out aggression.

Tl;Dr: I wrote a Jotaro x female OC please read and give feedback if you want and it is updated at least weekly 😎