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Fire Stone

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For Steph, who was my toughest critic,
For Gemma, who told me I had to have a 'sexy Seb',
And for my husband who pushed me, as much as it annoyed me. 

Hello peoples, I need a critic for this story
so feel free to leave comments and give feedback so I can improve my writings and make this story more enjoyable and worthy of being published.All Rights Reserved

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