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Fire Stone

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For Steph, who was my toughest critic,
For Gemma, who told me I had to have a 'sexy Seb',
And for my husband who pushed me, as much as it annoyed me. 

Hello peoples, I need a critic for this story
so feel free to leave comments and give feedback so I can improve my writings and make this story more enjoyable and worthy of being published.All Rights Reserved

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The Great War by BoystoryBabes19

*Wattpad deleted my original and i have literally no idea why. There was no smut, rasicm,eating disorders, or anything triggering in my story except violence and some mild swearing. There are so many stories on this app that actually go against the guidlines and they took mine down :( Thankfully I have the Sequal backed up on another app i use for writing and can put it back up. Im still sad howver I was working so hard to finish it. I also want to let yall be aware despite the Maturity tag theres no real spice in this story. I put the mature tag on so they didnt come for me if they thought something was to descriptive. Anyways the real description:* "Let me fucking go you asshole!" The man had an Iron grip on my arm as he lead me through the hospital doors. All the nightmares, the feelings of something wrong came at me in a flash.

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