Archidiam: a broken kingdom

this is my first full book ever written and I'm posting it here as a tester to see if people like it. it is not finished and I'm kinda in a writer's block but anyway, hope you like it and give me some feedback pls.

I don't have a good description but here:
Stella, a runaway, gets taken by who she believed to be her friends to a new land. after regaining some lost memories and finding out her truth, she must go on an adventure to find her lost twin, August.