Después de el golpe
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Last published Mon, Jan 6, 2020
Annie, una chica que se va a mudar a Texas Valley, influenciada por una antigua amiga íntima nos cuenta su historia a través de reflexiones y recuerdos del pasado mientras el presente avanza. Así es como poco a poco revelará la verdad y descubrirá el porqué del golpe.
¿Será esta la razón porque su antigua amiga la quería arrastrar hacia allí o debería hacer caso omiso a las posibles advertencias e intentos de recordar lo sucedido en el pasado?
¿Habrá alguna buena intención detrás de esta invitación, o es todo una coincidencia?
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