The Perfectionist Test
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In the year 2098 everyone must fill out a form at 17 to decide the reat of their life. They dont get to choose who they love where they live. Even where they work.
Adaline dosent like that kind of life. She wants to be free from the enslavement of the government. After she takes the test she meets the Leo her match. neither of them like the idea of absolute control. They plan to escape.
Here is the story.
This us a short story I had to write for my English class. A lot of my freinds liked it and told me I should post it so here it is
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